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Thursday, August 9, 2018

the destiny horse



The destiny horse



‘I can't wait for the ribbon day’ shouted Lilly over the loud thunder.They were shopping at the mall for new riding clothes for the ribbon day ‘oh ‘exclaimed Hazel Lilly’s 8 year old sister Lilly was 3 years older than her what Hazel had seen was a full riding costume all pink and red ‘mum MUM you have to get that it will suit me and sugar so much’ okay but that is it ‘ replied her mum. Flora there 5 year old sister had just gotten a light blue and navy blue costume that would suit her and her horse midnight.Hazel had chosen a blue and purple costume she hadn’t chosen it because it would suit her horse she just liked it well she had just grown out of her own horse Cardiff. As they drove of Lilly had imagined winning but at the moment she couldn't even go mum had promised her she could do it. A week had passed every day at school she was determined she saw a horse that was the prettiest mix of brown,grey and black.That weekend the sisters went to the mountain no she wasn't dreaming the was real the horse slowly walked up to her’ Flora hurry up go get mum and tell her that i have found the most amazing wild horse ever ‘ . Awhile later mum came running up to Lily and Hazel she had a halter tucked under her arm.The next weekend Lilly was so pleased she could actually do ribbon day. It was the final day of taming the wild horse she could get the horse to do anything Lilly just realized  she had not named the horse she got thinking an hour later Lilly thought of a name and that name was DESTINY . The day had come so fast it was now the ribbon day she was hoping to win lots of ribbons like the previous month. Hazel was the first to get changed into her riding clothes followed by Flora and you can guess who was next she was tired from getting 17 classes placed

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  2. Hello Isla, my name is Paige. I go to St francis of assisi school. I was just reading about the destiny horse and you put a lot of explanation in to the story. My favourite part about the story was when you said that Lily shouted over the loud thunder. I found it interesting because you put lots of description into the story. Your post brought me back to my 7th birthday when I got my first horse called bubble’s. I was wondering is this a fiction or nonfiction?

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  3. Hi Paige thanks this is not true so non fiction Isla

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    1. Hi Paige it is Isla again I am happy you commented it is one of the first things on my blog i didn't think it would be so great and get a comment from someone as kind as you thanks again Isla

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