Pinhead saved the day We have been learning to write six sentence story changing it to a paragraph a good way.Once upon a time there was a very big 30 metre robot his name was Pinhead. His birthday was April 30th .You could only see his brightly colored arma that shone in the night sky.
Pinhead lived in france that big city yes.Still only a few people saw him and if they did he it would be too bright to actually look at him. The actual place he lived in was paris it smelt like dust all dust.
When Pinhead was happy he would TRY to help people but it never worked. Because they would just run away screaming . When Pinhead was mad he wouldn't show it to do that he sat down in a corner and read a book that he hated.Pinhead only had one problem when he tried to help people they just screamed and the situation got worse. Once there was a fire but the fire killed seven people if the firemen had let Pinhead help it would never had happened.He felt that way because they never respected him and he just didn't like it . It didn't feel right if he helped people and they screamed at him .One day Pinhead heard loud noises from the town hall pinhead rushed there. In the town hall a person was being strangled by a snake pinhead rested the snake off the person from the pinhead was respected.