Wednesday, June 3, 2020
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Isla, this is short but very powerful. The simile builds a very clear picture and I like the way you have shaped it around your dancer.
ReplyDeleteHi Sharon,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment. I couldn't work out how to get the writing on-top of the dancer so I did it around the dancer.
Isla