On Tuesday the year 7/8's went on a ski trip. We had to be at school before 6:30. The bus ride was really long but when we got there I was really excited. There wasn't much snow and it was really windy but it was still lots of fun. I went on the top lifts with Poppy and Clara and Hamish. AT lunch we brought hot curly fries to warm us up. I wish I could go again.
Friday, September 25, 2020
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Hi Isla,
ReplyDeleteSounds like you had a great time! I really enjoyed it too. Next time maybe check the capital letters in your post, the word 'at' was in capitals so you could fix that. Maybe you could also talk about the ski trip in a bit more detail, and also include your favourite part of the trip. Nice job.
Caitlyn
Thanks for the comment, I will double check the capital letters next. I will think about those things next time I blog post. Thanks for the feedback.
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