I take the shimmering blue crystal, it flashes in front of my eyes, I step back, in a moment of shock. I feel my upper body twisting to the back and I see a contorted body shape, with peculiarly big eyes and a wide grin - creepy - I open my mouth to speak, but all that comes out is a strangled cry. I grab my throat to feel nothing but air. My neck has gone, I look into the reflection on my watch to see that my head is the only thing there. I gasp and fall back, the world blacking out around me.
Morning Isla, wow great story, I loved the way you illustrated the first part. You've used some descriptive words ( shimmering blue crystal, peculiar big eyes) this gives a great image in our head as we are reading it. At the start of your story you mentioned a space station did you get the inspiration with doing science on planets.? Great story writing keep it up.
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Yes I was inspired by the science we are working on. Thanks for the comment, Isla
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